Iggy, The Sucking House 9-10 Autumn Writing Competition Winner

The SUCKING HOUSE!!!!!!

Once there was a street with 50 houses, 49 0f them were normal one was not.It had a secret that people have been searching for an answer for over 5 years.

The owners of this house are called Mrs and Mr Wokkle. Both at age 857, they DETEST KIDS!!!

The dreaded secret of this house is it had been sucking kids in 1 by 1 for five years.

Mrs and Mr Wokkle are the kind of people who don’t throw your ball back when it goes over the fence... wanting you to come get it instead … that’s when they strike. The first person to get sucked in was a thick blonde haired kid called Chad.

Why are the owners so old you ask?... you see they’re aliens. No one knows… they have been collecting kids for their hair to fuel their spaceship. So the people with less hair are less likely to get sucked in.

But surprisingly no kid has died; they have survived by eating worms, in the mud underneath the house.

Suddenly, everything starts to shake. Then all the trees fall down CRACKLE BANG. The space ship begins to rise!!!

Earth tries to catch it in a bubblegun that was invented many years ago to stop child stealing spaceships… but that’s another story.

The spaceship shook aggressively breaking free. All the shaking dropped the missing kids from the mud like raindrops falling onto the neighbor's lawn. But it's too late. The spaceship has got away and Mrs and Mr Wokkle were never to be seen again.


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