Wednesday, August 8, 2012

Where the wild things are... by Matilda, aged 9

"They could see land, they could see trees and plants, but not much else. What would they find there? Finn suddenly remembered a favourite old picture book where a boy sailed to the place where the wild things are. Would there be wild things here? he wondered..."

What type of ignorant monsters are waiting for them? Yes, just waiting there. Waiting just to pop out and scare Finn and Cruze to a precise amount of wimpy-ness.

Then suddenly Finn stands up and grabs Cruze by the hand and says in a loud and proud voice "We're going where no other human has gone." Cruze then says, with the most unattractive face, "What do you mean no other human has gone?"

"Oh my god!" says Finn, "you'll find out when we're in there!" Cruze just shuts up and rolls his eyes. In about the one whole hour while they were there, Finn suddenly stopped as if he was a driver that just saw a tiger jump over a car! Finn then said, "Behold the Cave of Abithia!"


Chapter 2:  Who teased The Great Abithia?!

They walk in slowly, like a mouse with no armor going into a battle. They saw gold, but not much else. They could see a beautiful golden chair with a trim of diamonds and a little bit of hair sticking out the top!

They suddenly stopped dead in their tracks, showing on their face the most ignor-able expression. Then they heard a great big 'roar'! It was Abithia. She has seen another unbearable monster.

Finn and Cruze quickly tiptoed out, but suddenly the great Abithia roared with a big voice "Who's that tippy-toeing behind my back?!" and all the monsters turned and saw the little humans. The Abithia saw them and forced them to go and find gold because they were sneaking behind her back.

Finn was trying to tell her that they only wanted to have a look! But she just denied that and said "You were trying to steal my royal jewellery. But even if you weren't trying to, no humans are allowed on our island!" (and she had a little chuckle).

Cruze then says "Go cool with it bro" and Finn just replied "No way we're going to get out of this mess without a prawn to stick on a needle!" and Cruze nodded his head and kept on digging for gold.

It's like the part when the author says 'it's the end now' but you're wrong if you thought that, because it's only the beginning.


Chapter 3:  The end

Finn suddenly jumps up and says "I found gold!" and then Cruze takes charge and grabs Finn's arm and runs away. Finn says "Where are we going?" Cruze replies "We're going where every human would go!"

They went through long palm trees, spiky bushes and skinny spears. Then they were there! The boat sellers. Finn says "How are we going to pretend we're monsters?" and Cruze just looks around and sees a spiky bush and two flowers next to it. He turns around and says with big eyes "I've got an idea!"

Cruze turns and runs for those things. He puts the spiky bush on top of Finn and him and puts one flower on both of their faces.

They walk up to the seller closest to them and say "Have you got any boats for this much of gold?" and the seller says so fast you couldn't even understand him, "well yes I doodley do. I can give you big boats, small boats, medium boats or even all of those combined called the Queeny boat. So, what do you say?" but Cruze replies "we just want a tiny boat."

So the seller takes them over to a tiny, perfect yacht, and Finn says "Let's get this one!" so they jump in the yacht and give the money to the seller and sail away.

After a few hours Cruze asked for the map, but Finn says "we don't have a map!" so they just sailed away and never found their way. So that was it.

This is the part where the author says it is just the beginning, but I say it's the end!

Chapter 4:  The beginning

T H E   E N D.


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